Enclosed in this post are 6 of my favorite "Pseudo Haiku". I wanted to write Haiku, yet I did not want to have to conform to the traditional structure. I hope you will enjoy them.
Panama
You're not from around here
Said the Devil...... Panama. 2001
The old porch
Retains the fleshy drunken fixture
Year after year...... Hollywood,Ca. 2002
Winter wind
Birthday wishes puddled and smeared
On a whore...... South Beach,Fla. 2000
Toast colored hills
Desolate and serene
Another body dumping ground...... Studio City, Ca. 2002
Boulevard jungle
Implanted huntress gatherer
Societal Whore...... West Hollywood, Ca.2002
Late spring
Scraping bleeding poppies
Guarantees tonights dream...... Hollywood,Ca. 2002
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Its interesting to me how you made this form something that speaks to you, instead of you trying to conform to it. I like that.
Sara, I was after a "Setting, Feeling , and Resolve", type of format without having to conform to the syllabic structure. I'm happy you enjoyed them.
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